Wednesday, April 13, 2011

The Fall of the Roman Empire

Question:  Did the Roman Empire 'decline and fall' or did it evolve into something new?

The Roman Empire had been in its glory for a long time. They had conquered most of the known world and became a wealthy and diverse empire.  The Romans were masters of the trade routes and trained an army to be ready to fight any time, any place.  There were many rulers whom the people loved and praised.  The others were hated until they left the office or assassinated.  After the Roman Empire split into the east and west, things started to decline.  The “decline” of the empire was about a 320 year period.  Rome was not politically unified and the Eastern Roman Empire started to gain more power.  These changes influenced the different groups of people to evolve into something new.  Parts of the Roman Empire itself declined while others developed into something new. 

The Roman government went through a lot of hard times.  There were years of good and bad emperors.  For example, the crisis of the third century tested Rome to its limits as the rulers almost caused Rome to fall apart at the seams.  After Diocletian took the throne, he took part in a plan that he thought would help control the amount of power one ruler has.  The development of the tetrarchy pulled the empire farther and farther apart.  The four main rulers of the empire all fought for power.  This caused the Roman Empire to split in to two major parts and the move of the capital.  Constantine won the Battle of the Milvian Bridge and in return, made Christianity legal.  He also moved the capital to Constantinople, which is present day Istanbul.  This was the rise of the Greek speaking Eastern Roman Empire, or the Byzantine Empire.

After the practice of Christianity was legalized, people were more outright with their faith.  Before Constantine made it legal, Christians practiced their faith in secret.  The Romans persecuted the Christians and died for their faith.  The Romans did not like the Christians because they would not pay their share to the Roman gods.  This angered the Romans and caused many disputes.  Constantine saw the sign of the Ki Ro in the sky the morning of the battle and made his men write the symbol on their shields.  He wanted to thank the Lord for winning the battle and let anyone practice the Christian faith.  This caused more people to convert to the faith and it soon became a popular, worldwide religion.

Many different kings ruled the Western Roman Empire all at once.  Rebellions and armies were unorganized and there was a lot of miscommunication.  The Huns were headed to invade Gual but the efforts of the Roman and Germanic forces stopped them.  Battles between tribes were occurring everywhere and after 476 AD, Rome was under a barbaric rule.  There was no control for the Western Roman Empire.

The Roman Empire flourished and created a name for itself for a while.  After eras of bad rulers and battles, the empire faded and other places started advancing into something new.  The spread of Christianity was a major turning point for the world because it started advancement in new empires or nations.  Many powerful men taught they could rule and were thirsting for power.  Tribes of people soon became “empires” of their own.  The world is constantly evolving and the Roman Empire was ready for a new change.  The development of countries and nations shaped Europe into what it is today.

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4 comments:

  1. 5 paragraph- good

    Good thesis statement, you kind of picked both sides of the argument, but you had a good and clear statement that set up your paper.

    Make sure you include quotes!

    Your paragraphs were filled well, and argued your point, but you didn't have any quotes or evidence so make sure you add one for each paragraph!

    Your conclusion was good and summed up your paper.

    You had good evidence in the fourth paragraph, and I think your paper flowed nicely!

    No personal pronouns!

    Nice academic tone

    You did pretty good with avoiding generalizations, but when your writing make sure you have some quotes to back up what your saying.

    Good job avoiding extra quotes, haha just make sure you have the ones you need!

    You had a nice way of your writing, it flowed well and showed enthusiasm!

    This was a really good paper, you just need to add your quotes, so you can back up your thoughts, because they were really good! You argued your point well and anyone who read this would become informed! You had a great paper and I think with quotes would get an A.

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  2. 1. Yes
    2. Yes
    3. No, you had no quotes in your essay.
    4. Yes your paragraphs had enough length and went into very good detail.
    5. Yes
    6. Yes
    7. Yes
    8. yes
    9. Yes
    10. Yes
    11. yes

    You have a good essay just add some quotes from different articles besides wikipedia. Your tone and enthusiasm is very good.

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  3. Amanda,
    Even without quote this is a fantastic paper! BUT in your final draft don't forget 'em(;

    -beautiful flow to your paper, there was no jumping or anything.
    -some minor spelling mistakes that can be fixed.
    -great body in the paragraphs.

    Good essay! Great job! (:

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  4. You need to search through the resources listed on the wiki. Encyclopedia articles are not enough on their own; you need more substantive sources.

    Further, please quote and cite sources directly in your body paragraphs.

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